Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Maximum Ride Free Writing

Air gushed at me. With my breath sucked in, I was afraid to drink it in, afraid to be excited, for if I was, I'd probably jump off that giant eagle I was riding to the top of Mount Everest. Time passed slowly and all around me, there was nothing to see but the blues and whites of the skies and the massive gray of the mountain looming over my ride to the top. Gasping out of pure joy, I could've spent eternity up there, but no dream could last forever, especially if it was literally just a dream. Panting, I woke up from my brilliant night thought, only to be back from reality. For Shakespear, his oyster might be the world, but for me, it was the air, so naturally, I had an urge to jump off the tallest mountain in the world or to ride a giant eagle and zoom over the world. Okay, so maybe that's stretching it a bit, but that dream was one I had every night for as long as I could remember. Each time I had it, it only encouraged my urges, but whether it's possible or not, that was my ride, my maximum ride.

Jilian




MAXIMUM RIDE!

I am on the most maximum ride ever! it has Dragons, Smurfs, Lesser Demons, and last but not least, Telatubbies. Can you guess whats next? A 5000 foot drop at a 90' angle. Talk about maximum. Can it even get more life threatning than this? At the verry bottom of the ddrop there is a fire breathing dragon that comes swooping down at you and barfs out thousands of teletubbies all over you. Next you go into water and there are piranhas waiting to eat you but NOPE, you are going too fast. speeding at 300 miles per hour you do a loopdy loop into a volcano that has lesser demons that throw smurfs at you! Than you go over a ramp and land in the biggest bucket of ice cream in the world. Do you want to know the worst part about this? You wake up afterwards and have to go to school.

By: Dawson

2 comments:

  1. : )
    Good job you guys!

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  2. Wow good job Jilian and Dawson. Your stories have so much details for a short quick story.

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